http://purple-spock.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] purple-spock.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] float_on_alright 2011-02-07 05:19 am (UTC)

I love the title you picked. I'm crap with titles, so I'm glad that you're good at them - I'd be no help at all. : D I think that this turned out really well. Like I said, I like this ending better, I feel like it blends really well into the next part. Great job, especially considering that this is quite a bit more risqué.
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